Life Skills Arcade Middle school Family and Consumer Sciences, grades 6 to 8

Handout 7.10

Handout 7.10: Five-Panel Deck Template and Peer Review

Unit
Unit 7: Launch: Career Readiness and FACS Shark Tank
Lesson
Lesson 7.10: Build the Pitch and Prototype
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Handout 07.10 - Five-Panel Deck Template and Peer Review.md

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Team: ____________________ Date: ______________ Period: ______

CEO: ____________________ CFO: ____________________ CMO: ____________________

Unit 7, Lesson 7.10, both days. Page 1 is the planner. Nothing goes on the poster until the teacher signs the planner. Page 2 is the peer review sheet, one per student.


Page 1: The panel planner

Plan in pencil. Then build. The poster is the last step, not the first.

The layout, from ten feet away

Five panels, left to right. A judge reads them in this order without being told to.

PANEL 1PANEL 2PANEL 3PANEL 4PANEL 5
THE PROBLEMTHE SOLUTIONTHE CUSTOMERTHE NUMBERSTHE ASK
One sentence + one imageWhat you make, + one differentiatorFive specifics + one real quoteFive numbers, bigWhat you want, with a number
CMOCMOCMOCFOCEO

The one hard rule: panel 4 has to be readable from ten feet. Somebody stand at the back of the room and read it out loud. If they cannot, the numbers are too small.

Panel 1: The problem

The one sentence
The image (describe it; who is drawing it)

Panel 2: The solution

What we make or do
The one thing that makes ours different
The image

Panel 3: The customer

Who (one sentence, five specifics compressed)
The real quote from an interview, in quotation marks
The image

Panel 4: The numbers

These five numbers, nothing else, in big print.

NumberValue
Unit cost (what ONE costs us)$
Price (what we charge)$
Margin (profit on one)$
Break-even______ units
One month's profit$

Check: do these five numbers match the signed numbers page exactly? Yes / No. If no, fix the poster, not the page.

Panel 5: The ask

What we are asking for (specific, with a number)
What we will do with it

The prototype

Circle the route you are taking. It has to use a skill from this year.

RouteUnitWhat you are handing a judge
A sewn sample or a mended itemUnit 5
A dish, plated, or a printed costed menuUnits 1 and 6
A scale floor plan or room layout on graph paperUnit 4
A price sheet or budget, built like the investor reportsUnit 2
An activity kit card for a childUnit 3
A two-screen sketch of an app or web page, every button labeledUnit 7
A labeled drawing, paper mock-up, or written service cardany

Our one sentence: "We used a skill from Unit ______: we ______________________."


Materials we need from the trays

  • [ ] Poster board or trifold
  • [ ] Markers
  • [ ] Ruler
  • [ ] Scissors
  • [ ] Glue or tape
  • [ ] Graph paper
  • [ ] Index cards
  • [ ] Scrap fabric, thread, needle
  • [ ] Other: ______________________

Who does what, and by when

JobWhoDone by (minute)
Panel 1
Panel 2
Panel 3
Panel 4
Panel 5
Prototype

TEACHER SIGNATURE (the gate: nothing goes on the poster until this is signed): ______

Day 1 status report, end of period

Done: _____________________________________________________________

Left: ______________________________________________________________

Day 2: rehearsal log

Three times through, standing, with the poster up, all three speaking. Nobody rehearses sitting down.

RehearsalTimeThe part that ran long
1______ sec
2______ sec
3______ sec

The part that ran long all three times is the part to cut: ____________________

Day 2: the question we are not ready for

Our answer, one sentence (write it on an index card and put it behind panel 5):




Page 2: Peer review sheet

Your team listens to another team's whole pitch once, with their poster up. Score while they are talking, not after.

Reviewer's name: ____________________ Team you reviewed: ____________________

The pitch, against the class Lands and Kills list

Copy the top three from each column of your class list, then mark whether you saw or heard it.

LANDS (from our class list)Saw or heard it?
1.Yes / No
2.Yes / No
3.Yes / No
KILLS (from our class list)Happened?
1.Yes / No
2.Yes / No
3.Yes / No

The six parts

#PartPresent?Was it clear?
1Hook (a question or a number, not a greeting)Yes / NoYes / Partly / No
2Problem, and who has itYes / NoYes / Partly / No
3Solution, with one differentiatorYes / NoYes / Partly / No
4Who it is for, with a real quoteYes / NoYes / Partly / No
5The money, said out loud with a real numberYes / NoYes / Partly / No
6The ask, specific, with a numberYes / NoYes / Partly / No

Time: ______ seconds. Did all three speak? Yes / No

The panels (this is Rubric 07 criterion 5 and 6 in your words)

CheckYesPartlyNo
I could read panel 4's numbers from where I was sitting
The five numbers on panel 4 make sense together (margin = price minus cost)
Panel 3 has a real quote from a real person
There is a prototype and I can tell what it is
The prototype uses a skill from a unit and they said which one
The poster reads in order, left to right, without them telling me

Two written pieces of feedback

Both have to name something you actually saw or heard.

One thing to KEEP:


because __________________________________________________________

One thing to CHANGE:


Next time try _____________________________________________________

The one question we would ask you if we were a judge



For the team that was reviewed: your two revisions

You have to make at least two changes and write both of them here.

1. We changed ______________________________________________________

because __________________________________________________________

2. We changed ______________________________________________________

because __________________________________________________________

Team initials: ______ ______ ______


Teacher key

There are no right answers on the planner. Everything on page 1 is a structural check and a gate.

The four-gate scan, first three minutes of Day 1

Walk the room with a class list before releasing anybody to a material tray. Mark every team:

GateYes when
(a) Signed numbers pageThe CFO signed it and you initialed it
(b) Three recorded customer interviewsThree blocks filled with quoted words
(c) Six-part pitch draftAll six boxes written and two times recorded
(d) One sentence answering "what are you physically handing a judge"They can say it without hesitating

A team missing (a) goes to the Numbers Clinic. A team missing (d) gets the stuck-team protocol from the lesson. This three-minute scan decides where you stand for two full periods, so do it before anybody picks up a marker.

The planner signature

Ten seconds per team. Read the five panel boxes and the prototype route and sign. This stops the single biggest waste in a build day, which is a team drawing beautifully for twenty minutes with no plan. If a panel box is empty, do not sign; say which box and come back in three minutes.

Panel 4 legibility check

Stand at the back and read the numbers out loud. If you cannot, the fix is a marker and bigger digits, and it takes ninety seconds. Do this for every team before the end of Day 2, because it is the one thing a judge will notice from the table and it is entirely preventable.

What to look for when scoring Rubric 07 criterion 5 (the prototype)

  • Not Yet: nothing built, or unlabeled and unexplainable, or no unit named.
  • Approaching: something built and a unit named, but the object does not show the skill claimed. The three common versions: a "menu" with no prices, a "floor plan" that is not to scale, a "sewn sample" that is stapled.
  • Meets: exists, a judge can hold or read or look at it, built with a course skill, the unit named correctly in one sentence, finished enough to show what it was meant to show, and labeled.
  • Exceeds: Meets plus the prototype was tested against a constraint and the team can name the check (a teammate followed the card and it worked; the plan fits the measured room; the sample held when pulled; the menu comes in under the target cost per serving), plus one named improvement made after that check.

Do not penalize a drawn prototype. The rubric does not, and the route menu on the planner offers drawings to everybody on purpose, not as a fallback.

The peer review round

This is worth more than any teacher feedback on Day 2, because the criteria are the class's own Lands and Kills list from Lesson 7.9. Do not replace it with a teacher walk-through.

Pair team with team. Each team delivers once with the poster up; the listening team scores; then swap. Eleven minutes covers both directions for ten teams if you keep the transitions tight.

Score the reviewer's sheet complete, partial, or missing for daily work:

  • Complete: the six parts marked, the panel checks marked, both written pieces naming something observable, and the judge question written.
  • Partial: marks present but the written feedback says "good job" or names a feeling.
  • Missing: not turned in or fewer than half marked.

The two written revisions are the load-bearing part of this handout for the reviewed team. They are the evidence that separates Meets from Approaching on criterion 6, and the Exceeds level requires both written with a reason. Say that out loud before the round starts.

Stuck-team protocol, in order (from the lesson)

  1. Read their own problem sentence back to them from their filter sheet.
  2. Ask the physical question: "What are you handing a judge Friday? Point at it."
  3. Give the smallest possible version and a ten-minute deadline: "Panel 1 and the prototype. Nothing else. Go."
  4. Split two arguing members onto different panels, physically apart, reconvene at ten minutes. Hand the clock back to the CEO out loud.
  5. If the idea genuinely does not work, say so plainly and give the fallback: an honest pitch that names what they found out. "We tested this and here is why it does not work at this price" is a real pitch and it scores at Meets on criterion 6. Do not let a team spend Friday pretending.

When a team finishes early, in order

  1. Rehearse two more times, standing, timed.
  2. Write three judge questions and answers on index cards behind panel 5. Give them the three you would ask: what is your margin; who already does this and why would somebody pick you; what is the first thing you would do with the money.
  3. Improve the prototype in one named way: a second size, a price tag, a label, a second menu item, a second floor plan option.
  4. Consult for another team. They may ask questions and read the rubric aloud to that team. They may not draw on that team's poster. This is on criterion 3's Exceeds level, so name it as real work.
  5. Grade 8: write the one-paragraph version of the pitch as a written brief, which doubles as the read-aloud document if somebody is absent Friday.

Collect at the end of Day 2

The team folder: the business brief, the customer research, the numbers page, and this planner with the unit connection sentence. Rubric 07 criteria 3, 4, and 5 are scored from that folder and the object tonight. The poster and the prototype stay in the room, on the counter, taped down, in running order.